Sunday, May 22, 2011

I'm not too good at this whole title thing...

A couple posts ago I mentioned that my mom made me a dress from this pattern...

...well, here's a picture of me wearing it. And yes, I realize that it's a little blurry.

And another picture (I know that I look kind of odd in this picture, but I was tired of having my picture taken, so I leaned against the door)...

What do you peoples think of this for the opening to a story?...

I could see the class clown's eyes probing the room, searching for a new person to tease. I closed my eyes. I just knew that he would choose me. After all, my new adopted sister, Annice, was a year older than me, and she was in the same grade. If that wasn't teasing material, what was?

What do you think?

Who here heard that the end of the world was supposed to be yesterday? I forget the name of the person who said that, but he did say it.

Have a great day!


  1. Trust me, most bloggers find it hard to come up with titles. XD As for the outfit, it looks great! And as for the end of the world, eh, people are drama queens and kings.

  2. I don't know the name either. And I'll go with icewolf, most bloggers do see to have trouble coming up with post titles.

  3. I like the snippet that you wrote and I think it would be good for the opening of a story :) The dress is very pretty as well :)

  4. I love the dress it looks so pretty.

  5. I actually feel quite alive. I would hate for the world to end, i haven`t even finished the first boss of my brother`s new video game!

    The dress looks even better in real life! (Trust me, I`ve seen it.) It`s so cute! I wish I had a dress like that.

    Signed with a messed question mark (É),

  6. Very cute dress! And that seems like a very interesting way to start a story. ;)


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